The Chill

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The Chill

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Three reasonable edits of a single concept:

VERSION 1

moonlight
keeps dark at bay
pressing in

night wind stirs
mocking breath
of life now lost
to lightless realm
beyond this chill
encircling me

worn stone step
where rail eluded
grasping hand
as ankle bent
held oranges spilled

moon caresses
tender neck
once softly kissed
from which no voice came
to futile cry

those lips
will not know again
sweet fruit

nor love

blackness presses in

VERSION 2

moonlight
keeps dark at bay
pressing in

night wind mocking
life now lost
beyond this chill

no emotion
save grief

a worn stone step
a grasp-less hand
an ankle bent
held oranges spilled
tender neck
once softly kissed
now broken

a futile cry

those lips
will not know again
sweet fruit

nor love

darkness presses in

VERSION 3

moonlight
keeps dark at bay
pressing in

oranges spill
on worn stone steps
rail eludes
grasping hand

night wind stirs
scattering
the futile cry

mocking
the breathless life
lost to the lightless realm
beyond this encircling chill

these lips
will not know again
sweet fruit

nor love

~ ~ ~

rob kistner © 2020

 

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