reprised 5/12/2022 …homage to Misky’s 5/10/22 prompt
My warm mouth
upon you
fully
I bite you
gently
feeling your flesh
firm on my teeth
your juices glisten
trickle from my lips
heady rich
and sticky thick
your taste
tantalizingly tart
tingling my tongue tip
I bite you
crisply
my savoring breath
swoons softly
your texture
is exquisite
and bouquet
intoxicating
your succulence
like love’s nectar
such a luscious pleasure
my sweet strawberry!
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rob kistner © 2019
10/1/19 poetry at: dVerse
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rob kistner © 2022
5/10/22 poetry at: dVerse
5/12/22 OLN poetry at: dVerse
https://youtu.be/yFc-clt3vKc
Very sensual, and strawberry-ish!
My favorite berry!
Nice tease
Thank you Tim! 🙂
You set me up! Reading through it again with the knowledge of it being a strawberry, it is exactly like that. Such a yummy poem.
GOT-CHA!! Thank you Lisa… 🙂
My favorite fruit. A luscious write.
Thank you Grace! I luv’em too — especially on shortcake w/hand-whipped whole cream, and a touch of vanilla & honey! YUMM! 🙂
I love the strawberry twist, Rob!
Glad you enjoyed it Kim! It was fun to write… 🙂
Nice lines: “your taste
tantalizingly tart
tingling my tongue tip”
Thank you Frank!
I would love to kiss such luscious moist redness.
So sweet on the lips Björn!
You rake! A delightful gotcha!
I have fun with misdirection Bev… 🙂 Gives me the opportunity to write erotic pieces, and then smile and innocently say, “not me, it’s all in the mind of the reader,” 🙂
Such a sensual piece of fruit and you enjoyed every second of biting into it! It was good to see you at OLN!
Thank you Merril. It was nice to be feeling better and to enjoy a visit with the core group.
Hahaha! What you might not know is ‘strawberry’ is one slang word for what you described in French!
🙂 as it should be Ain… 😉
Oooh this is delightfully sensuous, Rob! 😀
Thank you Sanaa. Coming from you, that is high praise my ftienf.
Well done.
Thank you Ken. 🙂
I had a feeling from the beginning it might be about fruit. 🙂
I’m so glad you’re okay after surgery.
Yes, fruit of a kind Shawna 😉 I am feeling better. Little tired still, and soar — but glad I did it! 🙂
I love this kid. Listen to everything of his you can. He won American Idol last year.
https://youtu.be/4CAIDQiJcg0
I think this is his most recent:
https://youtu.be/0UU0R5tj-9Q
Great stuff Shawna, excellent — thanks for sharing this dude’s work. Thd fuet was strong!
How very sensuous, Rob! Now I feel hungry. I’m glad you joined me with a food poem, though yours was more sweet and innocent (maybe not so innocent!) 😀
If only you knew what was going through my mind Sanaa when I FIRST WROTE it 3 years ago. It was a condensed evolution of a Series I call “Soulfruits”.
Whew. Is it hot in here?
… and sweet Xan! 😉
Just got home. Clicked you first. Yum. Thanks.
You are always welcome Ron! Gotta keep it tart my friend… 😉
Oh that was a delicious tease…. I am happy to see you post. Smiling
Can’t keep an ‘ol rocker down True… 😉
A singular taste!
Sweet and tart Kerfe!
An enticing poem, Rob!
Thsnk you Ingrid… 🙂
You can take a man’s drive out of his body, but age can never take away the sweet memories! Well done, Rob.
You are so right Dwight! 😉
Lush and ripe, erotic and sweet. Just like strawberries.
Love me them strawberries Christopher! 😉
Strawberries are so sensual… much more than the wholesome apple.
Yes, and peaches! 😉
Yeah, yeah, strawberries, Rob! 😉
I just watched the recording and it was wonderful to see you, Rob. Take care.
Thank you Punam. It was wonderful to be able to be seen! 🙂