Poetiscapes

 
T he seed of a poem lay dormant in my heart. Mostly always true, and usually that seed is planted by something I’ve seen, maybe heard. That then sparks recall of feelings, maybe other visuals, related feelings. I string them together, editing until an emotional thread appears — then I translate that visually to a poem.

Visuals are one of my favorite inspirations. Writing to a preconceived form is repressive to me. I create visual impact to elicit emotions. Poetic forms are secondary in my writing. When chasing a form, I build a puzzle — reshaping my true poem so it fits.

My fundamental purpose for writing poetry, is the same when writing song lyrics — which for me came first, at age 16. I want people to visualize with me, to have them feel something emotionally. Joy, sorrow, love, anger, loneliness, recollection, longing, comfort — all are good.

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rob kistner © 2023

Poetry at: dVerse



 

Poem Closed Down

 
The seed of a poem lay dormant in my heart. When the lads planted it, weeds overgrew it — the damn city closed it.

SORRY — UNDER RENNOVATION
We must take it slow.
Don’t want any injuries to occur during the rebuild.

DEEMED FAULTY METER
By order of the city.
And the city are real sticklers,
so we are going to error on the side of caution.

STRUCTURAL PROBLEMS.
This has been a real damed bugaboo right from the start.
I feel the foundations might require examination.
We plan to move carefully.

DANGEROUSLY CLUTTERED WITH ADJECTIVES.
Some poor fool got in here with a thesaurus
and did a real number.

CONFUSINGLY REPETITIVE.
Nothing to add here.

OVERALL — NOT VERY COHESIVE
Need to tie up loose ends.

 

Hope To Upgrade & Reopen This Poem — Very 😉 Soon…

maybe?

 


See you when…

144 words

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rob kistner © 2023

Poetry at: dVerse