NaPoMo poem #5
This is the fifth of the poems I will be writing each day here in April, in honor of National Poetry Month, as proclaimed by the Academy of American Poets.
• NOTE: these poems will all essentially be early drafts, so edits may occur after their initial posting.
Still Life
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like drizzled honey
the sun through the treetops
paints my face in golden warmth
my thoughts drift to you
and the tall ships in Beaufort Harbor
their sails aglow
etched in shadows
cast by their riggings
and the masts of adjacent ships
you commented how the patterns
reminded you
of abstract charcoal sketches
the artist in you
always interpreting your world
sunshine made radiant your gentle face
your green eyes sparkled
squinting in the rays
your smile
brighter than the sun that day
I stared captivated
watching your eyes dance
among the docks and ships
that unfolded like a still life before us
watching your lips sculpt your words
wishing the moment would last forever
knowing that it could not
this morning
my memories
amble sweetly
back through time
I find solace in this cuddled light
knowing it warms you
as you rest peacefully
in the sun-drenched meadow
where last you closed your eyes
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rob kistner © 2009
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• you can find other NaPoMo offerings at read write poem
Wow, Rob, you really ahve a way of beautifying the world! I love the words, “I find solace in this cuddled light.” Lovely!
for sure…great way with words…”drizzled honey” good way to start…..now for my PB sandwich…and honey
I agree with Linda– solace in this cuddled light – great line. Your daughter has a way with words.
I love the word ‘solace’. Beautiful job. I heard someone interviewed today. Some bigwig in the poetry biz – he claims we don’t teach poetry in schools anymore and that fewer people write it. I beg to differ!
You images are inspiring.