Eternal Dream

~ love is the answer ~

 

Dream with me my love
love is the magic we will seek

seek it until the end of days
days numbering to eternity

eternity — where love’s magic hides
hides in the folds of the lotus

lotus lifted on gossamer wings
wings of purest beauty and truth

truth — the key to perfect surrender
surrender is the secret of love’s dream
dream that goes on forever

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rob kistner © 2022

More loop poetry at: dVerse

 


12 thoughts on “Eternal Dream”

    1. Thank you Carol! 🙂 I just tried to leave the comment on your site Carol telling you how much I enjoyed your loop poem. Unfortunately I couldn’t get it to show up. But I like your piece.

    1. Thank you Reena… 🙂 The stanza loop of “Those Days” was my broader interpretation of the form, whereas “Eternal Dream” was my stricter adherence. So for me it was simply writing two poems that were dissimilar enough to be totally separate frames of creative thinking.

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