Dream with me my love
love is the magic we will seek
seek it until the end of days
days numbering to eternity
eternity — where love’s magic hides
hides in the folds of the lotus
lotus lifted on gossamer wings
wings of purest beauty and truth
truth — the key to perfect surrender
surrender is the secret of love’s dream
dream that goes on forever
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rob kistner © 2022
More loop poetry at: dVerse
Beautifully put together!
Thank you Carol! 🙂 I just tried to leave the comment on your site Carol telling you how much I enjoyed your loop poem. Unfortunately I couldn’t get it to show up. But I like your piece.
Surrender is something I’m learning to do more and more, we have to go with the flow and enjoy the dream, your verses point the way!
Never easy to leave one’s self vulnerable Tricia, but vulnerability is the door through which truth enters
I love this:
“eternity — where love’s magic hides
hides in the folds of the lotus”
I am pleased this resonated for you Shawna… 🙂
Nice loop Rob. I am a kd fan so i luv the image you teamed up with your poem.
Happy you dropped by to read mine.
Much love…
Thank you Gillena. I enjoyed your piece… 🙂
Love is the magic and key. Thanks for writing a second one Rob. Have a good weekend.
Thank you Grace, and you’re welvomd… 🙂
Good one! One was a challenge for me. You managed two 🙂
Thank you Reena… 🙂 The stanza loop of “Those Days” was my broader interpretation of the form, whereas “Eternal Dream” was my stricter adherence. So for me it was simply writing two poems that were dissimilar enough to be totally separate frames of creative thinking.