NOTE: When I write a sensual piece, my intention is not to write pornographic, not from a sexually predatory perspective — but rather from a place of deep love and passion, shared by genuinely committed lovers.
Last night, I quietly watched you, asleep in the light of the half moon, as it traced the soft edge of dark and light, where it enfolded so gently upon you through the open window, fondling your form.
My eyes embraced full measure, your beautiful essence, to then be lost in the golden tangles of your hair, radiant in the pure moonglow. It fanned out in soft wisps, across your graceful neck, then lay smooth upon your silken breasts, that rose and fell with your breathing. Here I lingered upon the precious tender bud.
As your breath fell, my eyes glided further, down through the valley of your rose petal navel, to be entranced by the velvet flower, sensuously shadowed in the satin cleft, where supple limb met supple limb. Such sensual serenity. I swooned, and swelled to bursting, with love.
by this vision before me
intoxicating
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rob kistner © 2023
More moonlit poetry at: dVerse
What a wonderful vision, just watching is intoxicating.
Oh my yes — and thank you Björn… 🙂
If one thing is going to steal the moon’s glory ~ your vision is it!
I think maybe Paul, thanks… 🙂
Beautiful and romantic Rob.
Thank you Christine… 🙂
A very smoothly erotic vision, Rob. Beauty at its finest!
Thank you Dwight, might be old, but I’m not dead yet… 🙂
Rob, you are def a romantic at heart.
Yes True, and always will be… 🙂
It does sound intoxicating! Very romantic.
Thank you Kerfe, I always have been, always will be… 🙂
Your haibun shimmers with moonglow, Rob – so romantic and erotic. I especially love the image of the half moon tracing ‘the soft edge of dark and light’ and the description of the golden tangles of hair.
Thank you Kim — pleased you found it interesting… 🙂
Intoxicating is the perfect word for it. ????????
Thank you Jay… 🙂
Captivating, Rob. 🙂
Thsnk you Kitty… 🙂
Sensual indeed. Nicely done.
Thank you Maggie… 🙂