T oday I didn’t feel less
didn’t feel more
just clear and comfortable
and reasonably level
pale golden yellow
no small victory
*
rob kistner © 2023
Poetry at: Poets & Storytellers
Poetry at: dVerse
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T oday I didn’t feel less
didn’t feel more
just clear and comfortable
and reasonably level
pale golden yellow
no small victory
*
rob kistner © 2023
Poetry at: Poets & Storytellers
Poetry at: dVerse
There comes a time when that IS a victory. I love the brevity of this, the single, clear image.
Thank you Sarah. I wrote that in a moment of calm. 🙂
Not a bad feeling.
Yes Björn, it surely beats a sharp stick in the eye my friend… 😉
“Some days are diamonds, and some days are stones..”
Glad it was an even keel day for you!
For certain Dwight. “…sometimes the hard times won’t leave me alone.” Small victory when they do… 🙂
It is just about right. Being comforable is all that matters.
Being ADD, not everyday is level for me, so the ones that are, mean a great deal — small victories.
oh, for more of that clarity! well done Rob
Thank you Eric… 🙂
Achieving equilibrium certainly counts as a victory when times are as strange as they are now.
Sometimes seems an impossible task… 🙂
I’d take that feeling any time of the day. Poignant write, my friend 🙂
Thank you Sanaa… 🙂