Sky of Ardor


“Demand & Supply” by: Erik Johansson

 

T here’s an island city
rises from the sea
may not be for you
it’s heaven for me

every desire is satisfied
every night’s a fantasy
but you work your ass off
ain’t nothin’ free

there’s a suspended gondola
locked to most
but for the special
there are keys

those invited
have been given one
those who have none
are not invited

take your pitiful
elsewhere
please

to the inner sanctum
the gondola rises

come barefaced and honest
this place is brutal real
knife edge zeal
no agendas
no false guises

a place of labor
a place of ardor
a place of hard truth
a place of tough love
of amazing miracles
from wondrous minds

this place’l grip ya’
like steel binds

it’s the ever-pulsing artery
feeding the beating heart
of the truly free

come with me
and you will see
a most surreal
reality

but know
these are not lies

if you enter that door
to make that rise
you will be changed…

…forevermore

*
rob kistner © 2023

Poetry at: dVerse

 




6 thoughts on “Sky of Ardor”

  1. Alluring and mysterious. A place of ultimate truth, whether magical or difficult. I am convinced. Send me the gondola.
    I was intrigued by the video as well (Zeal and Ardor).

  2. I found this image a little eerie, and you justified it with the lines

    a place of labor
    a place of ardor
    a place of hard truth
    a place of tough love
    of amazing miracles
    from wondrous minds

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