Original DDE™ surrealistic art: “Danny & Dot” by: rob kistner © 5/16/24
Here’s a love story to blow yer mind
about danny and his big ole belly
who loved dotty and her grand behind
now neither one looked like a model
but their passion was well defined
they loved to go dancin’ dressed up tight
yes it’s amazing what spandex can bind
they’d shake it like balloons full of jelly
they’d feel the feels — the big love kind
they’d dance n’dance like crazy
they’d bounce jiggle and roll
neither one of them was lazy
they’d go and go and go and go
‘til morne was dew-drippin’ hazy
‘til the world was a golden glow
‘til they both were feelin’ spacey
‘til they stirred their hun’gry souls
then make lotta’love — a wee bit racy
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rob kistner © 2024
Poetry at: dVerse
Poetry at: Poets & Storytellers
Well, this one had me smiling. Thank you.
Pat
😉
Weaving their own special in this Magic 9, Rob…
They are quite a
pearpair Andrew… 🙂A poem to bring a smile, Rob. I hope they lived a long, happy life together!
Glad I made you smile Merril… I think they got their life figured out — low stress — long life… 🙂
Awesome…I like Danny and Dot!!
Thank you Di — they’re good folk… 😉
Well, that made the imagination run wild, ha ha! Enjoyed your poem, Rob ??
Thank you Sunra… 🙂
As an ardent lover of funny rhyming poetry ~~ I place the Gold Medal ’round your neck! Cheers and Bravo.
Thank Helen… 🙂 I enjoy writing whimsical “Jabberwock” poetry… 😉
“they’d feel the feels — the big love kind”
Oh yeah! Two big warm bellies beats two sticks any day in my book. I knew Fat Bottomed Girls would be one of your musical selections for this one, Rob. I love the graphic!
Thank you Lisa… 🙂 As someone with a big warm belly, I agree with you wholeheartedly my friend… 😉
This is a happy couple with a big kind of love. Love all the feels of this poem.
Thanks for joining in and wishing you a good weekend.
Thank you, Grace. Riding this was a lot of fun… 🙂
All lines are lovely, but- ‘they’d shake it like balloons full of jelly
they’d feel the feels — the big love kind’- gave the highest sort of feel.
Glad you enjoyed it… 🙂
Now there’s a couple who enjoy their tucker 🙂 Thanks for reminding me about Nicolette Larson. She is great. I used to have all of her albums. Hope you and the Mrs are well……Rall
A couple was dirty solid lovers that’s what Danny.are. I admire a passion and commitment. They’re quite a couple Rall
Now I’m singing, “Shake It Up”!
…and shake it down, n’all around 🙂
The beloved always looks beautiful in the lover’s eyes.
And isn’t that the wonderful way it should be Rosemary. With fewer extemporaneous distractions it is much easier to look into the depth of the heart and soul — where enduring beauty my be.
Smiling at this one! Good for them enjoying life.
How are you and Kathy doing?
Indeed Danny and Dot are a grand couple… 😉 We are well True. Kathy is back east bringing comfort to her mother, as her father has passed. Sad times, but her mother is a strong wonderful woman. Someone I warmly admire. Thank you for inquiring my friend… 🙂
All i could think of was pink Blancmange – i think i need a lie down – Very amusing and mind-bending. Well done.
Thank you Alan, so very glad you enjoyed this… 🙂 …quivering pepto… 😉
I love Danny & Dot! I can envision a weekly comic strip featuring them.
Thank you Sara. Don’t go giving me ideas… 😉
It sounds like Danny and Dotty know how to have a good time!
Rollin’ raucous resounding fun Melissa… 😉