Distant Farewell

  • LONG-FORM, FREE-VERSE, SCI-FI ADVENTURE/LOVE POEM

  • Far-Worlds Corp research space schooner “Thadius”

     
    Distant Farewell

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    “I’ve watched
    golden fire clouds,
    hanging in pale green skies,
    over the azure seas of Toluras

    I’ve seen the copper leaves
    of the parmus fronds
    flashing from indigo mountains
    in the crystal mists of Gemin.

    I have beheld exquisite beauty
    in my rich, full life
    but none so beautiful
    as your eyes tonight”

    this Artheo whispers
    his breath warms
    the tender lobe
    of my eager ear

    he presses his lips
    softly to mine
    with gentle passion
    bids me farewell

    now three hours past
    I linger in the bittersweetness

    I can still taste him

    here I am
    hurtling through space
    standing on the aft deck
    gazing

    reliving the kiss
    a sudden chill
    shocks me sober

    been here, done this
    precisely this
    in every detail

    impossible

    it’s my first time aboard

    a foreboding grips me

    I shiver as I watch
    the jade-sapphire orb
    grow smaller
    less relevant

    it now recedes
    less visible
    through the carbon-Lucite

    zero-g frost
    forms and obscures
    this breathtaking view
    of the lush planet

    our home planet
    Gaia

    a place
    some now on board
    will not again see
    for fifteen years

    if they are
    counted among
    the fortunate
    who do return

    we race
    exceeding light-speed
    toward a distant
    call for help

    unknown destiny
    in uncharted space
    with no idea
    what we will encounter

    the call made it certain
    no good lay ahead

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    I am Sephias
    going to Topiarus
    to return
    in a year’s time

    I am distraught

    the anxiety
    of separation

    intense pressure
    permeates the crew
    who go the distance
    to the edge of space
    to answer
    the cry for help

    it is contagious
    I feel this too

    I feel ungrounded
    each time I choose
    to leave my man
    to go on mission

    my soul mate
    Artheo

    our love is deep

    it has withstood
    these essential
    separations

    we understood
    when I joined Far-Worlds
    that separation
    came with the program

    but knowing this
    makes it no easier

    my anxiety
    is heightened further
    given this mission’s
    uncertainty

    at Far-Worlds Corp
    we are involved
    in new-resources
    exploration

    we’re scientists
    not trained spacetroopers

    our expertise
    not military

    this ship
    the Thadius
    is a space schooner
    solar-wind powered

    a research vessel
    not a fast and agile
    battle cruiser

    not suited
    for space combat

    the security force
    we have on board
    trained to defend
    not to attack

    they protect us
    from known threats
    on our journeys
    through known space

    this mission’s different

    the unknown
    makes this dangerous

    the Dextorium
    was an advance ship
    sent to reconnoiter
    9 months ahead

    the Dextorium
    did in fact carry
    a battle-trained
    spacetrooper force

    but it has now
    fallen silent
    for many months

    the green glow
    of the interstellar
    contact indicator orb
    means they’re out there

    but silence
    not a word

    stream

    to take my mind
    off things disturbing
    I drift to Artheo
    to our last kiss

    he presented
    a calm brave face
    at our goodbye

    but I knew better

    now together
    two centuries
    rest assured
    I know my man

    as decorated Primests
    of the Science-Sect Elite
    we are privileged
    with three birthing cycles

    to improve the human strain
    a 40-year
    no-birthing period
    our second
    now nears its end

    soon
    we will enter
    our third
    free-birthing cycle

    we both welcome
    the sabbatical
    of twenty years
    that it affords

    we’ve begotten
    families
    in prior cycles
    and love them both

    we now dream
    of this newest family
    our near future
    holds in store

    this coming family
    is most important
    in our lives
    Artheo’s and mine

    state edicts dictate
    3rd cycle families
    caretake their fosters
    as health declines

    as we move closer
    to our stand down
    and cryogenic
    hibernation

    this new family
    will be our comfort
    as our current life-phase
    draws to a close

    as I reflect
    I am disrupted

    a sudden chaos

    panicked commotion
    on the foredeck

    there is great alarm

    I rush forward
    in time to see
    a startling scene
    begin to unfold

    there
    directly in front
    of our speeding ship
    menacing fields of energy

    they begin to spread
    linking together
    with apparent logic
    forming a grid
    blocking our path

    acting intelligently
    as though a sentient
    living thing

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    they are immense
    and they are many
    as they assemble
    into a spherical net
    continually expanding
    as far as one can see
    it is there

    spread far too vast
    to travel around
    their advancing speed
    we cannot outrun

    as we approach
    the pulsing web
    their acceleration
    becomes exponential

    no doubt we’re on
    a collision course

    suddenly
    my senses jolt
    I stagger back
    in shock and awe

    it is now quite clear
    what fate befell
    our advance party
    and it appears others

    they’ve been, well
    they’ve been absorbed
    by this horrific
    electronic death-mesh

    we are defenseless

    we on the Thadius
    can only stare
    frightened
    but spellbound

    the crew’s emotions
    now run the gamut
    tears fill most eyes
    as hell approaches

    then I see more clearly
    in the eerie violet
    sphere of energy
    closing upon us
    tiny multi-color specks

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    captured life-energies
    of the Dextorium crew
    and countless others
    that have come before

    their vital essence
    has been consumed
    by this entangled nightmare
    that now besets us

    their images flicker
    in and out of focus
    trapped in the grid
    held fast and hopeless

    empty faces
    of complete surrender
    translucent
    dead eyes
    living ghosts

    this thing is coming
    this host of evil

    terrified
    I feel helpless
    so confused
    and so alone

    its then I rush
    to my solarcomm
    to send a message
    to Artheo

    holding a Droon orb of light
    bravely I begin
    first sharing poetry
    as is our custom

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    “we have walked quietly hand in hand
    in the emerald meadows of Telma
    sharing its golden angelfruit
    sweet as our stolen kisses

    we’ve heard the haunting call
    of the coral winged Lellurt
    in Droon’s violet skies
    over teal Darpin Bay


    now fate deems we part
    see this Orb of Light
    it is my true heart
    when I am gone
    it will shine on
    sweet Artheo
    it is my love
    eternally”

    “right now,
    I want to hear
    your soothing voice
    my precious love.”

    “I would give the world
    to hear your voice.”

    I am speaking
    in a tone controlled
    yet laced with longing
    and melancholy

    “I love you my dearest
    but something bad
    is happening now
    here where I am”

    “there’s a chance”
    then I must pause
    collect myself
    to start again

    “there is a chance,
    I may not return
    to you again,
    to our sweet life”

    here my voice quavers
    and then it cracks
    as I try to add,
    “or — to our children.”

    grasping for courage
    I go on

    “if this is
    to be my end
    it falls to you
    to raise them now”

    “please let them see
    they’re loved forever
    protect them well
    and keep them safe”

    it’s now a struggle
    to form the words
    but filled with love
    I press on

    “remember my eggs.
    they are safely stored
    at the Off-World Corp’s
    Reproductive Center.”

    “my surrogate
    has been selected
    she is tested
    and bonded pure”

    “you must see
    our new family born
    Zenus and Rennar — born

    please promise me!”

    choking back
    so many emotions
    I now fight
    to conclude the message

    this is the last
    I will ever send
    to my beloved
    Artheo

    these are the last words
    he’ll hear me speak

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    “these children,
    Zenus and Rennar,
    will be the final connection
    between you and I”

    “remember forever
    they are a part
    of each of us
    my darling one”

    “he and she
    will care for you
    and see you through
    your dimming years.”

    “they will love you
    as you’ll love them
    give them my love
    tell them about me.”

    voice faltering badly
    I rise to finish
    and share with Artheo
    my final words

    “god, oh god,
    how I want you
    here in my arms
    my one true love!”

    with that,
    my heart breaks
    as I stare silently
    into the screen

    teardrops streaming
    down my cheeks

    12 hours later
    the message arrives
    on Artheo’s
    commstation screen

    he is gripped
    by disbelief
    at what he sees
    at what he hears

    consumed by horror
    unable to move
    he stands trembling

    frozen by grief

    as he sees
    my message end
    my image flickers
    and then it fades

    Artheo
    falls to his knees
    without sound
    silent for some time

    then
    with a growing mix
    of fear and sorrow
    on his ashen face

    he throws back his head
    thrusts up his arms
    straight and stiff
    fists clenched in anger

    clenched so tightly
    nails
    cut into palms
    and bring forth blood

    bloodied hands
    whitened knuckles
    stab at the stars

    he keens and moans
    then begins to wail

    the guttural
    heart-rending wail
    of a man bereft
    soul-gored
    devastated

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    rob kistner © 2008
    (revision © 2019)

    The artwork above is by: Hera, of Stockholm, Sweden

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    Poet In Arms

     

    Poet

    abandon vague image
    do not weave a fabric of myth
    or speak to us in grand verse
    telling of the song of the spheres
    or the days before this dark time

    you see many things poet
    but you talk in riddles
    you avoid the cold hard way
    for the soft path of platitudes
    of metaphors
    of meter and rhyme
    but this is not the time

    look poet
    look into the flames
    the fire of human suffering

    feel it burn your eyes
    char your soul
    tell us how that feels

    tell us how to see
    with our own eyes
    help us see the real place of light

    you must tell us poet
    in the power of plain language
    in the clear voice of truth
    tell us what is real

    we will listen

    with a pure heart of justice
    raise your shield of words
    lift your pen poet
    like a sword

    show us the grip

    we will save the beauty
    celebrate the wonder
    protect the unique splendor

    or we will join the battle
    to strike down imbalance
    to drive away sorrow

    lead us poet
    we will follow

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    rob kistner © 2011

    Written for: Magpie Tales

    Poetry at: dVerse

    Poetry at: Poets & Storytellers

    Poetry at: earthweal

    The Box

    This piece is offered in response to prompt Mag 29 at Magpie Tales,
    and the August 25th prompt at Three Word Wednesday,
    and prompt #18 at Writer’s Island.




    The Box

    …a short story of intrigue…

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    “What do you mean Taylor,” Gwen inquired, the strain obvious in her weary voice. “Who exactly is going to confront Dylan… and why?”

    Her voice trailed off to an exasperated whisper. The why was not so much a question, as an exhalation of confused frustration. She seemed to know the answer was much too complicated to address at this hour, and she was too spent, physically and emotionally, to want to hear it.

    Gwen turned away from Taylor, head lowered. Her arms fell limp at her side, fingers splayed. She was trying her best to process what Taylor was saying, to understand him – to understand the recent events that had brought her to this place in time… trying to make sense of anything. Her head was spinning, and she could feel the fatigue deep in her bones.

    She dropped back onto the sofa, half sitting, half lying down – an exhausted slouch. She felt paralyzed, thoughts racing through her mind – fragmented, disconnected thoughts. If only she could clear her head. She was in trouble.
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    Burn

    …in response to the 13th prompt of 2010 on Writer’s Island, I offer a piece I wrote inspired by Joni Michell’s album entitled “Don Juan’s Reckless Daughter”. Embedded in this work is the title of every track that appears on that album / also for prompt #126 ‘Angel’ at One Single Impression…



    Burn

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    come to me
    talk to me otis
    and
    marlena
    reveal your mystery

    I am your brood
    sired by your seed
    bloodied
    from your womb

    whisper
    in a scorching breath
    tell me about
    the tenth world

    taunt me
    in scalded apparition

    tell me how
    to get to dreamland
    to cotton avenue
    on a hot off night
    back street in jericho

    tell me of the fires
    on paprika plains
    that consumed your souls
    in flames of hunger
    to lust
    for immortality

    made you dance
    at midnight
    wrapped in
    the silky veils of ardor
    on prurient
    smoldered embers

    I want to go
    I am ready

    an inferno burns
    inside me
    desire rages strong
    to ride the bliss of sin

    son of concupiscence
    I am
    your son

    your lifeblood
    courses through me
    hammers in my temples
    sets my heart ablaze

    impassioned
    I wil prowl
    the shadow’d haunts
    of jericho

    the dark places
    of the tenth world
    following your ghosts

    seeking
    don jaun’s reckless daughter
    my scarlet jezebel
    my nocturne angel
    to take me
    in a fever

    to whirl me ‘round
    to burn me down
    to ash

    to scatter me
    by moonlight

    forever
    in the winds
    of memory
    on those plains
    of ardor

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    rob kistner © 2010

    • photorendered collage entitled “Dance of Ardor” by: rob kistner © 2010

    The Quiet • The Strike

    I’ve written two pieces in response to Three Word Wednesday July 21st prompt • the first is entitled “The Quiet” • the second is entitled “The Strike”

    The Quiet

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    left like spent bait
    in the disapproving sun
    to rot from apathy

    the carcasses of constituents
    foolishly quiet
    curl brittle and crack

    victims of their trust
    they did not jump
    their chance for change

    and so they wither
    hollowed by ignorance
    and purposeful neglect

    while the dark beast
    slouches off with eden
    marrow dripping from a smile

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    The Strike

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    warm
    familiar
    comfortable in my palm
    my fingers wrap natural cork
    index raised
    gauging line tension

    precision brings the willow’d shaft
    high above my shoulder
    rod flexing expectantly

    a flick of my wrist
    and the line arcs forward
    increasing the pressure
    on my fingertip
    as it rolls ahead
    accelerating

    then
    a careful pluck
    like a string
    on a guitar

    it is released

    the golden lure
    at line’s end
    sails silent
    into the squinting summer sun

    with a subtle plick
    the barbed hunter disappears
    slipping ‘neath the sparkle
    of the undulating steam

    seductively
    with quickening pulse
    eagerly visualizing
    I retrieve the bait
    anticipating the strike

    patience draws the lure
    dancing ever nearer

    I long for the sharp
    powerful tug

    for the slender thread
    unreeled before me
    to rise
    and dart away
    in a sliver of silver spray

    for my heart to jump
    as a proud trout
    breaks water
    victim to my seduction

    in this moment
    mind focused
    breath steady
    senses heightened
    awaiting sudden contact

    I reflect

    there is a simple truth in fishing
    in life

    the thrill of possibility
    can be as rich
    as the reward

    • • •

    rob kistner © 2010


    Sad Little Clown

    …presented as a second gracious salute to the first prompt from Big Tent Poetry

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    Sad Little Clown

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    I am the sad little clown
    with the frowning face
    the round red nose
    and the great big tear

    this meek facade
    and silly sham
    belie the horror
    that I engineer

    life’s dealt me cold
    my hand is slack
    not a queen
    no king nor ace

    the violence
    that dwells within
    is masked behind
    my woeful face

    no one suspects
    the evil soul
    that festers deep
    in this funny fool

    they know not
    the monster in me
    the gentle sheen
    conceals the cruel

    they don’t realize
    a broken heart
    a ruined life
    makes one quite mad

    they simply see
    the pitiful
    and painted face
    that looks so sad

    the shaggy coat
    the baggy pants
    the red suspenders
    the big white glove

    they do not know
    it hides the hand
    that choked the life
    and killed their love

    town after town
    state after state
    bodies mount
    in the circus’ wake

    in the dead of night
    at the dark of moon
    in frenzied fever
    each life I take

    each beautiful
    each innocent
    each unaware
    that they would die

    there will be more
    on the road ahead
    one for every tear
    you made me cry

    when the circus comes
    and the tents go up
    the people cheer
    in each sleepy town

    ‘cause in their ignorance
    what they don’t know
    who’s really come
    is the killer clown

    • • •

    rob kistner © 2010

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    photo from: Ringling Bros. and Barnum & Bailey Circus

    NaPoWriMo #29

    This is my Twenty-ninth, and penultimate post for National Poetry Month 2010

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    …this poem was inspired by D.S. Apfelbaum’s day 29 post at readwritepoem…

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    Space Is

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    a lightless void of soundless vacuum
    spinning masses of revolving orbs
    hurtling fragments in crystalline vapors

    molten cores
    mingled gasses
    dead husks
    black holes

    magnetic icefalls
    plasma rain
    liquid lightening
    solid clouds

    attractions and repulsions
    of precarious fragility

    a frozen dance of chaos
    on the tentative edge of balance

    unfounded fear
    unquenchable wonder
    unrealized dreams
    ultimate frontier

    relativity’s fabric
    tangled in the cloth of time

    reality’s illusion
    set in fantasy’s foundation

    ceaseless hope
    endless adventure
    unexpected catastrophe
    boundless courage

    humankind’s triumph and sad folly
    the seductive promise of the future

    our salvation
    infinity’s threshold
    the eternal question
    the elusive answer

    the everlasting bastion
    of never-ending truth

    a longing call
    a constant listening
    a driving force
    a reason why

    fountainhead of myths
    spark of religions
    and other superstitions
    home of the gods

    magnificent obscurity
    a source of mystery
    font of knowledge
    cause of fiction

    the unknown of the unknowable
    nothingness absolute

    the billions and the billions
    ever expanding everything

    …space is

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    rob kistner © 2010

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    artwork entitled “Infinity’s Door” by: rob kistner © 1998

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    NaPoWriMo #27

    This is my twenty-seventh post for National Poetry Month 2010
    • one acrostic
    • one tanka


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    • inspired by Carolee Sherwood ‘s day 27 prompt at read write poem to write an acrostic

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    Evolution

    •

    Even in chaos nature finds balance.

    Violent floods beget fertile fields.

    One thing ends, another begins.

    Life is a cycle of birth and death.

    Untamed wildfire creates forest ash.

    The ashen remains nurture growth again.

    In the caterpillar lives the butterfly.

    One thing ends, another begins.

    Now and forever, the mandella spins.

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    Stone Fox First

    •

    garage sound check great

    groupies at the ludlow door

    allmans soon to start

    damned duane is still m-i-a

    we stone fox boys are ready

    • • •


    • acrostic and tanka by: rob kistner © 2010

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    NaPoWriMo #26 – Power / Alternatives

    This is my twenty-sixth post for National Poetry Month 2010
    • one free verse poem
    • one tanka


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    • inspired by Jill Crammond Wickham’s day 26 prompt at read write poem

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    Power

    •

    let us speak of power

    the writer’s words
    the artist’s eye
    the craftsman’s hands
    the singer’s voice
    the player’s soul
    the actor’s courage

    all who rise up in creativity
    to share their gift

    who elevate our humanness
    shun our negative self

    who share their spirit to inspire

    who see great possibility
    in the face of great challenge

    who will not succumb
    but prevail
    as a kindled flame
    to light our darkness

    theirs is the power
    they are the powerful
    for they empower

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    Alternatives

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    three hundred miles gone

    we’re just above dream canyon

    big storm front building

    cycles won’t make the snow pass

    guess we point our two wheels south

    • • •


    • poem and tanka by: rob kistner © 2010

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    NaPoWriMo #24 – In Vain / Daddy’s Girl

    This is my twenty-fourth post for National Poetry Month 2010
    • one free verse poem
    • one tanka


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    • This poem that follows is inspired by Marie Gauthier’s NaPoWriMo day 23 prompt at readwritepoem to find and use a colloquial phrase — and by the current frustration I am feeling trying to deliver on my promise of at least 1 poem a day for 30 days. This day I am blank – my muse is being quite difficult. So for inspiration I looked to a poem I’d written 3 years back about just such a situation of writer’s block. I wrote this new poem from those 3-year-old bones, sparked additionally by Robert Lee Brewer’s NaPoWriMo day 23 prompt at Poetic Asides: exhaustion.

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    In Vain

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    the virginal glare
    of the backlit void
    taunts me

    the tiny pulsing cursor
    throbs like a migraine
    in the blank white field

    untouched
    ignored
    impatient

    no burden of remorse
    no weight of mystery
    does it bear

    no sting of anger
    no wink of mirth
    to reflect

    nothing sensual
    or sensitive
    to share

    no coin of phrase to save

    just empty screen
    tormenting nothingness
    30 in 30
    pressing down

    dissonance spills through my open window

    the scatter of rain
    stir of wind
    rustle of wet leaves

    muffled keens
    bursts of barks
    distant yelps

    the edgy din
    of dripping
    prowling
    april night
    intrudes in damp insistence
    to fill my head
    and leave not one small space
    for wit
    or insight

    all in vain

    there is no spark

    in this soggy midnight
    left high and dry
    no muse in sight
    only exhaustion

    nothing clever
    or profound
    in the air this night

    chilled
    slack

    uninspired

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    Daddy’s Girl

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    shy knock at front door

    lovely daughter descends stairs

    who is this brash boy

    shake his hand or run him off

    daddy’s decision is tough

    • • •


    • poem and tanka by: rob kistner © 2010


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    NaPoWriMo #11 – Play Ball!

    This is my eleveth post for National Poetry Month 2010
    • one free verse poem
    • one haiku




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    …this piece was written in keeping with the spirit of a prompt by Angie Werren over at read write poem who asked us to write about the choice we didn’t make…

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    Spring Recall

    •

    it is this time every year
    perhaps coaxed by the warming breezes of spring
    that a flood of recall is unleashed

    smell of leather oiled in neatsfoot
    clatter of wooden bats in a canvass bag
    rattle of metal spikes on concrete
    snug feel of the ballglove
    tuggin’ on the cap
    rollin’ the bill just right

    smoothness of the cowhide sphere
    grip on raised seams
    click and clack of the catcher’s gear
    cheers, jeers and sometimes tears
    right foot on the rubber
    excitement of taking signs
    leg coiled for delivery
    the hey batter batter
    pop of the ball in the pocket
    anticipation of an onrushing grounder
    launching the throw across the diamond
    shielding my eyes in a high sky
    relief of snagging one in the webbing

    feel of polished hardwood
    crack of the sweet spot
    exhilaration of connecting solidly
    breaking down to first
    taking a good lead off
    soft slide into the base
    the thrill of swiping second
    the joy of crossing home
    my teammates in a dog pile
    sweet sweet exhaustion
    knowing I left it all on the field

    your arm around my shoulder
    the pride in your eyes
    root beer at the soda fountain
    with the team after the game
    riding home on the tailgate
    of our old Edsel wagon

    it is every year
    at this time
    that I think of all of this
    that I think of you

    how you wanted me to try pro
    how the scout felt I had the arm
    it is the path I didn’t take
    you never made me feel sorry

    thank you for these memories
    thank you for your love

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    Chalk Lines

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    chalk lines laid on dirt

    crack of white ash on cowhide

    son’s smile is a joy

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    poem and haiku by: rob kistner © 2010

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    …for more poems about other roads left untraveled, go to readwritepoem

    NaPoWriMo #6 – The Cast / The Rise

    Rhiannon had suggested in the day 6 NaPoWriMo prompt at Read Write Poem that we sort through a collection of our pictures as inspiration for this day’s poem. Although I veered a bit from her precise suggestion, the process of sorting brought me to the pictures I have of my fishing adventures, and that inspired this — so thanks Rhiannon!



    This is my sixth post for National Poetry Month 2010
    • one free verse poem
    • one haiku

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    The Cast

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    cliff-climbing conifers
    stir in the brisk dawn
    as breezes swoop the gorge
    rustle my jacket
    nip my cheeks

    across the casual rapids
    near the stony shore
    rainbows surface in slack water
    hungrily gulping morning hatch

    my most recent offering undulates past
    in the glinting chatter of spring flow
    unacknowledged

    chuckling
    I turn

    elbow steady
    I begin to rotate my lengthy bamboo
    behind to two PM.
    silently stripping the slender thread
    from current’s surface
    leaving a razor crease
    disappearing quick as it comes

    the lacquered rod bends forward as I lift
    then slowly flexes back
    the line arcs behind in flight
    trailing silvery spray

    backward pressure builds
    as line nears full unfurling
    but just before
    a smooth return
    slowly brings the shaft
    again to ten AM

    now
    I feel the forward pull of the soaring mass
    as overhead the line recoils
    midair

    the glass-green fiber
    rolls out ahead
    over azure ripples

    the singing strand painting an “S”
    in the cloudless sky

    quick
    smooth
    and quiet
    the line is re-wed to stream

    the feathered morsel at the tip
    offered yet again
    coaxing a ready trout
    to rise
    and strike

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    The Rise

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    fly reel freshly oiled

    new tippets cut and tied firm

    spring trout on the rise

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    poem and haiku by: rob kistner © 2010

    • photorendering at top of this post is entitled “The Cast” – by: rob kistner © 2010
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    …for more NaPoWriMo 2010 poems: readwritepoem

    Racing

     

     

    Racing

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    right
    keep right came the response
    redirecting the runner
    in reaction to his rapid-fire request regarding the route

    racing recklessly in redoubled resolve
    certain this resurgence would redeem his rough start
    he ran rampant

    refusing to relinquish his radical pace
    no longer rambling
    he raged like a rogue renegade

    determination renewed
    hope refueled
    spirit refreshed
    his belief was rekindled that a resounding victory would result
    if he would just run
    run
    run

    his rally realized
    lungs raw and ragged
    he rocketed ‘cross the finish line
    reared his head
    and roared raucously

    arms raised in release
    tears rolling in relief
    he rejoiced
    triumphant

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    rob kistner © 2010

    …discover what else is running at One Single Impression

    On The Edge

    If hell froze over and if pigs could fly, then perhaps there would be an additional host-venue candidate for an upcoming Olympics — and Kevin Bacon and Mia Hamm could be on the US Alpine Downhill Ski Team? Until then, Lindsey Vonn, Bode Miller and all the international skiers are flying down the frozen slopes in Vancouver, BC… so this is a short prose piece I wrote a couple of years ago, but have never posted here on image & Verse — and to celebrate the 2010 Olympics, I am unveiling it here.

     

     

    On The Edge

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    It has all come to this. No turning back now, no room for doubt, no fear, no place for mistakes. Years of preparation, visualizing my dream, of tenacious conditioning, practice, of sacrifice, of hope, is finally culminating in this one moment in time.

    I hear the winds whistle in the shell of my headgear, the snow crunch crisp and fresh underfoot as I step off the aerial tram and stride to the starting gate. My skis, waxed to perfection, are thrown over my right shoulder, both poles gripped in my left hand. I vibrate with nerves and pure, refined energy.

    As I make the short walk I reflect, “over 90 miles per hour for 90 seconds, airborne, hurtling down the mountain like a rocket, free-falling just at the edge of control, at the edge of disaster… at the edge of euphoria! I love this! I can do this, just don’t catch an edge!” I push that brief slip of negativity out of my head, and begin to visualize, while repeating, “tuck tight, knees flexed, eyes down the mountain, fearless… fly!”

    I sit to tighten my boots and affix my skis. I hear the chatter of coaches and officials, the mantra-like self-talk of my competitors, and the clamor of the crowds that collect along the course, gathered exuberantly dense at the bottom.

    I begin to slowly tune all that into a background monotone buzz, then a quiet hum, squelching –– until finally, I tune it out altogether. I focus, dialing myself into my personal space, my place of vivid concentration, intense presence… my zone.

    Here I wait until my coach comes to lead me to the starting gate, where I check in with the race officials, and queue up. It seems just a blink of an eye and he comes, and I go –– go to what I believe will be victory, my time of destiny. I am ready!

    Standing behind the next racer poised to start, I acutely envision the entire course, racing section by section, successfully making and re-making the run in my head, the same one I’ve made many times in practice. I imagine the gate fly open, see myself push off, thrusting with all my might into that first steep drop, accelerating fiercely into the first turn, building a torrid pace, knifing down the mountain, as if an apparition, a vapor, a blur… gone 90/90!

    At last, alone in the gate, I see the mountain stretch out below me, the crystalline white falling and twisting –– down, down. This is it, it’s here, my dance with fate; but this is no gamble. I am so totally ready for this, ready to roar down the icy slope, surge across the finish line… ready to fly!

    The starting tone begins to pulse. My mind links into the cadence, my body feels the rhythm. My vision grows sharp, my senses keen, my surroundings –– vibrant. Time is folding into slow motion, honing down to the long-awaited instant, the critical split-second. My legs are wound springs, my arms and shoulders are powerful pistons, my heart, a thunderous locomotive. The brink is reached, then crossed. The gate swings away as I launch, in one mighty explosion…

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    rob kistner © 2008

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    •> collage above entitled: “On the Edge” — by: rob kistner © 2008

    …this post was sparked by a prompt at sunday scribblings