my splendrous dream
a place of beauty
pure as light
of goodness
strong as sterling
a place of plenty
where no one wants
precious gifts
freely bestowed
to those
that dwell in truth
whose voices rise
in sensuous song
of celebraton
rob kistner © 2019
Beautiful, Rob.
Thank you De! Might be this new medicaton… 🙂
More minds like this, please!
Wouldn’t it be nice Ken! 🙂
WOW. Perhaps we’d all like some of that new med! This is beautiful, Rob.
Thank you Beverly! 🙂 I love your Quadrille this week, but the Blogger sites are refusing my comments again? 🙁
Such a place of light you describe! Wonderful dream, Rob.
Thank you Lisa… 🙂
Good, good writing Rob!
Thank you Susan.
Wish my meds would kick in. all we need though is more love in our hearts. Beautiful poem.
Like the boys said, “All you need is love, love is all you need!” Thank you Toni… 🙂
Lovely, let our voices rise. 🙂
Thank you Jp — yes!
Lovely dreams – my favorite topic.
Yes True, the ethereal plane.
Beautiful words here Rob.
Thank you Linda! 🙂
May we hear those voices:
precious gifts
freely bestowed
to those
that dwell in truth
May we indeed Grace!
Great poem Rob. You make those voices sound heavenly!! Who knows whether dreams come true!
Thank you Dwight. A cricket once told me they do, if you wish upon a star… 🙂
Yeah, dig it. I need to hang with folks like this–wait a minute, I already do.
Thanks Glenn — yes you do!
“sensuous song of celebraton” — wonderful!
Thank you Q! 🙂
I like the way your quadrille builds up, Rob, to a crescendo in a ‘sensuous song of celebration’.
Thank you Kim! There ha to be some celebration in a positive ecstatic piece… 🙂
It sounds wonderful, Rob. Would that your dream becomes real!
Thank you Merril! Perhaps the dream itself is healing and motivational… 🙂
Such dreams are the best….
Certainly Björn, and the most popular.
I like the thought of gifts to those who dwell in truth.
Wouldn’t be many distributed these days Frank, not in this world of bullshit in which we currently dwell.
a fine dream indeed
Thank you Kerfe! 🙂
That sounds like quite a wondrous dream.
Thanks Barry.
Nice Quadrille.
It shows youth
Brimming out
A heart touts
To dwell in truth
To suffice What’s real.
Nice Dream. 😉
Thank you Lona! 🙂
Ah, that dreams would come true!
Would be nice Sara… 🙂
Realities begin with dreams. The world could be this kind of heaven, if only we’d got it right. An inspirational write.
Thank you Mish! 🙂
Sounds like heaven.
Wouldn’t it be nice Imelda… 🙂