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eyes dark and deep as nile nocturne
scorching as nubian sundance
this blackthorn rose
is the secreted passion
the sultry jungle goddess
inscribed in the book of ardor
fired in molten scarlet
woman forged of earthen bronze
ablaze in the sensual dreams
of writhing midnight
she is smoke and flame
the mysterious traveler
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• Magpie Tales prompt Mag 23 •
Hot-hot-hot! Grab that fire extinguisher and put out the flames….or not!
Thank your for your visit and comment Willow. I think I will let Jourdan simmer a bit longer… 😉
…rob
She is beautiful … flaming and real! Nice writing!!!
Thank you Helen…
…rob
Beautiful words building an image in flames.
You are kind RA, thank you…
…rob
Sssssssssssssss!!!!! (That’s meant as a sizzling compliment, Rob!)
thththththank you Catalyst… 😉
…rob
Dear Rob: Ardor…mesmerizing poem! The alliteration is intense; like drums beating. Lovely conveyance. Excellent cadence!
Thank you Jane, your kind words are appreciated…
…rob
lovely, women… of earthen bronze….very sultry…bkm
Thank you BK…
…rob
Earthy and Sultry….nicely written!
Thank you Troy…
…rob
Nice take on the “hot” prompt, Rob….
– Dina
Appreciate the kind words Dina…
…rob
excellent-steamy hot and wonderful!
Thank you Kathe…
…rob
WOW!!! This was so elegantly done!!!
Loved the mysticism in the poem, and the sensuality and the absolutely brilliant imagery just added to this perfection!!!
Thank you Kavita, your comments are much appreciated…
…rob
ahhhhhhh…..lost in a dream of such beauty..both the woman and the words
…most certainly the woman Grizz… 😉
…rob
smokin descriptive piece!
Thank you DS…
…rob
“writhing midnight” is particularity great!
Thank you Twitches, I too liked that line when my muse popped it into my head…
…rob
She is gorgeous, so is your writing.