Original DDE™ surreal art: “Hunting On The Wing” by: rob kistner © 10/4/23
Osprey calling above the forest nearby
eyes focused sharp on the stream below
should he spy trout — he’ll tuck and dive
smooth cunning predator — he fishes solo
takes his victim quick — rocketing in low
talons like knives — he’s a lethal machine
wounds deep and deadly — delivers clean
with stunning precision, power, and pace
his attack instincts are impeccably keen
proud noble bird — pure speed and grace
his call is defiant — listen, you can hear it
that piercing scream — his unique battle cry
independent — you’ll not restrain his spirit
he is swift and agile gliding across the sky
beautiful assassin — stalking from on high
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rob kistner © 10/3/23
Poetry at: dVerse
I’m pleased to see the prompt inspired you to write another poem, Rob, and a stunning one! I love the use of punctuation to mimic the osprey’s movements – the tucking and diving – and the way it levels out in the lines:
‘with stunning precision, power, and pace
his attack instincts are impeccably keen
a proud noble bird, pure speed and grace’
and
‘he is swift and agile gliding across the sky’.
Thank you Kim. I enjoyed writing both. “As It Is” was essentially SOC with some final editing to organize the piece a bit. SOC is my favorite way to write. “Beautiful Assassin” was written, inspired by my perceived nature of an Osprey. In the 25 yeard we lived near the Oregon Coast, I have had the joy to have watched them many times over the Pacific Ocean, Cascade Mountain lakes, and mountain trout streams. Cool that it came through that way for you. 🙂
You evoke the killing precision perfectly Rob…
Thank you Andrew… 🙂