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let us dare
sweet lust’s advance
to intertwine
in love’s enhance
I burn to offer
love’s special kiss
to fire your soul
in passion’s bliss
to enfold you deep
in nocturne’s hour
to taste the nectar
of your tender flower
you are the dream
that I adore
my one desire
to love you more
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rob kistner © 2011
blissfully romantic words
Nice cadence and controlled rhyme.
i love it… esp the last verse….
JJRod’z
Romantic loveliness…
sweet.
An excellent love poem!!
this has a nice gentle rhyme to it that accentuates the love felt through your words rob…nicely done that…and sensual too dipping into that floral nectar…
So beautiful……..
🙂
You had us at /taste the
nectar/–this one really
stands out from a lot of
your other poems; old
fashioned, formal, and
as sweet as drippings
from a honey pot.
Firing souls? Mmm smoldering words…
to fire your soul
in passion’s bliss
you got me at this line! Brilliant, passionate, so hot hot hot! Phew!
Lovely and soooo romantic.
Filled with passion. Love it!
A lyrical piece that somehow reminded of Dowland. Should be set to music!
I love a bit of romance!
hmm…beautiful and gentle lovesong..
nice rhythm and rhyme