Impulse
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captive to urges
woodpecker drums summer stumps
boys kiss moist red lips
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rob kistner © 2008
Impulse
•
captive to urges
woodpecker drums summer stumps
boys kiss moist red lips
• • •
rob kistner © 2008
summertime love affair? there’s something sensual in this haiku. liked the two stories intertwined here (assuming im correct) 🙂
boys…
in their dreams.
Human and animals share that trait don’t they? Loved the haiku Rob!
ToTomai –
Summer is a sensual season — so are moist red lps… 😉
Richard –
Always in their dreams… 😉
Tammy –
Thank you… 😉
Impulses are present in all living things, be they instinctve or considered.
Thanks for this posting – I enjoyed exploring your work. Moe
moist red lips and summer..like the connection
Sounds like an idyllic summer 🙂
Somehow think the woodpecker would be having more fun than the boy though, if this was in Chennai for the simple reason, it’s too hot here for anything but taking shelter under the shade of a tree (or the AC for an indoor person)
lol – It depends on how “hungry” they are – the primal motivation… great haiku Rob!
its the simplicity that amazes me here.
makes me wonder about the relationship between our impluses and instincts.
🙂
wonderful haiku’ words…………Rob Kistner , the picture and the poem goes hand in hand.