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darkness surrounds me
rain continues this pre-dawn
life is damp and chill
out there inspiration mocks
refusing still to visit
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rob kistner © 2011
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darkness surrounds me
rain continues this pre-dawn
life is damp and chill
out there inspiration mocks
refusing still to visit
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rob kistner © 2011
Oy. 🙁
Mock back.
Rob,
I guess it is the agony of an empty word day!
Best wishes, Eileen
I hope you break through that soon. Best wishes in this New Year, Rob.
Sounds like writers block…nice write
Poignant piece! I know the feeling. It helps me to write my way through it.
I can relate to this, Rob.
I get mocked by inspiration all the time. I can relate.
This is hauntingly beautiful. I’ve so been there.
Isn’t it frustrating to be in that black hole? You convey the feeling perfectly in so few words.
very nice…inspiration mocks….love it..bkm
Your blog has the only music I listen to. This inspires me.. beautiful.
Your low ebb bringw powerful poetry, by inspiration out of hard graft.
Every poet goes through a few phases in his/her life when (s)he doesn’t feel inspired. Don’t worry. It’ll pass. And you’ll find that after a heavily clouded grey sky the sun will shine again. BTW your poem was inspired so you really don’t have to worry.
There is no bigger inspiration for a writer than a broken heart or the darkness of the night.
This is beautiful.
I liked it very much Rob..could relate to it..
there are days…but chase it anyway…smiles.
oh i know days like these…beautifully captured..
Stunning! as always richly evocative.
joanny
Hi Rob
Ahh!!! the dilemma… been there… Thanks for sharing..
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so lovely! ♥