Original digital surreal art: “Moonlight Tears” by: rob kistner © 9/4/23
I seek solace from my sorrow
I pray for each tomorrow
the nights are full of fears
I am adrift upon my tears
moonlight’s a chilling sliver
piercing deep my tearful shiver
shaken by uncertainties in my mind
peace seems so impossible to find
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rob kistner © 9/4/23
Poetry at: dVerse
I relate to this feeling. Sending hugs.
Thank you Melissa… 🙂
The rhymes make it sound lighthearted despite the heavy message.
Lighthearted depression Björn… 🙂
I love your moonlight tears, Rob, the gentleness of the rhyming couplets, and the poignant final couplet, which resonated with me – I’m not sleeping well these days either. I hope you feel better very soon.
Thank you so much Kim… 🙂
Wow, Rob. This is so relatable, beautiful, powerful, succinct, painful…
~David
True sorrow is painful, but it is a peak human moment, and always slters the course of your life a bit.
I’m so sorry for your sorrowful nights, Rob. ????
Thank you Merril, my wife and I both experience these at times these days.