MUTE
•
sparse conversation
then no words remain
we part
I channel surf
you read
the silence screams
our love is mute
…
Rob Kistner © 2007
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MUTE
(haiku)
•
Sparse conversation
We part, no further words spent
Our love has gone mute
…
Rob Kistner © 2007
Amazing how few words it takes to conjure such a powerful image! Your words remind me of the song by Big Head Todd and the Monsters entitled “Bittersweet”. Worth a listen if you get the chance.
Cheers
I am pleased you felt the power Matthew. It was a very emotional write for me.
if they have it on iTunes, I will check out the song you referenced.
Thank you for stopping by to visit!
–and so it goes–
…Rob