eyes dark and deep, as nile nocturne
blackthorn rosebud, secret passion
mystery dreamed, fantasy craved
earthen lustwitch, molten ardor
scarlet scorching, sultry vision
forged in bronze fired, writhing midnight
wanton temptress, my dream desired
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rob kistner © 2021
Poetry at: dVerse
Good on you, you joined in, and the jump cut, 2-word humps work like crazy. This form, oddly reminded me of American Senmtences.
Thanks Glenn. I had to give it shot.
This is so sensual, so deeply poignant in its glimpse of the desire that consumes .. especially like; “blackthorn rosebud, secret passion mystery dreamed, fantasy craved.” Thank you so much for writing to the prompt. Love this! 🙂
Thank you Sanaa. I am very pleased you liked this. I never quite got comfortable with the form, but did my best… 🙂
You capture your passion and mesmerization well here, Rob. You nailed the form also, which isn’t easy to do. (I couldn’t manage it.)
Thanks Lisa, still feels like an awkward form for me — but hey… 🙂
Gorgeous, Rob.
Sincerely,
David
Thank you David — love ya brother! Make sure you listen to ALL the tunes I posted. It is part of the wholistic lustwitch experience!
Well done! Very passionate and sensuous.
Thank you! 🙂
Simply beautiful.
Thank you Misky… 🙂
A full of passion write! Fabulous songs…all.
Thank you Punam!
Black Magic Woman is a good fit for this.
It felt right Ken!
.. ‘lustwitch’ will stay with me a while! Passion personified .. Great write, Rob!
Poetic license Helen… 🙂
I like your mistress…. she might even be a succubus or a nine-tailed fox
She’s a beautiful magical mythical Nubian queen of Egypt!