NaPoWriMo #24 – part 3: Evensong

This is part 3 of my twenty fourth post for National Poetry Month 2010

…this poem was inspired by the April 24th prompt at Poetic Asides — write an evening poem…

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Evensong

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as dusk descends upon this place
my stride holds smooth and steady
with grace and heady expectation
the downing sun a gentle gold embrace

early shadows fall soft across my face
as vesper’s velvet blanket
drapes its comfort ’round my shoulders
splendid calm envelops me

there is still some road to travel
I am eager to keep the journey
drawn by the beauty
that is the rising moon in sunset

facing into the evening breeze
I venture onward toward my love
rolling amber fires the lane
spreads warm ‘cross the horizon

a fog begins to rise and waft
I see nestled in the valley
my blessed hearth & home
veiled copper in eventide

my heart rises in the moment
caught up in this gorgeous vale
the ribbon of its brook entwines
wraps my soul in evensong

my smile sweetens
my pace livens
I hum a quiet melody
the wonder of another day

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rob kistner © 2010


…artwork entitled “Evening Glory” by: Steven Mitchell

4 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo #24 – part 3: Evensong

  1. It was all beautiful but this especially – “as vesper’s velvet blanket drapes its comfort ’round my shoulders” – I could sink into that.

  2. Thanks for bringing us along on this walk. Every step was a delight. No mere poem here, this is a sensory experience.

    (But did you perhaps mean to hum a “quiet melody”?)

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