Original DDE™ surrealistic art: “Ocean’s Beauty” by: rob kistner © 4/18/24
Beauty walks to the sea by her home
on this bright and sunny spring day
wants to explore this sea alone
so joyfully she swims away
on this bright and sunny spring day
with her heart awash in wishes
she so joyfully swims away
down to the colorful fishes
with her heart awash in wishes
a’swim in the ocean’s sway
down with the colorful fishes
she is filled with love today
a’swim in the ocean’s sway
she’s exploring this sea alone
she’s so filled with love today
for this wonderful sea by her home
as she embraces its vast unknown
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Original DDE™ surrealistic art: “Ocean’s Spirit” by: rob kistner © 4/18/24
B eauty walks to the sea by her home
on this broken cloudy day
slips into the sea alone
silently she swims away
on this broken cloudy day
alone with her fractured wishes
silently she swims away
deep down with the fishes
alone with her fractured wishes
a’swim in the seabed’s sway
deep down with the fishes
she is leaving it all today
a’swim in the seabed’s sway
with nothing more left to say
she is leaving it all today
the sea carries her spirit away
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rob kistner © 2024
Poetry at: dVerse
Poetry at: NaPoWriMo 2024 — Day 19
A wonderful pantoum….a wonderful mermaid’s world! 🙂 LOVE it!
Thank you Lil, very much… 🙂
Rob, I do love her carefree spirit, where she travels to explore sacred spaces. Beautiful image of her also <3
Thank you Lisa, you are always very gracious my friend — I appreciate it… 🙂
I’ve never had the pleasure of swimming underwater and seeing colourful fishes, but there is an aquarium in a nearby seaside town, which your poem has compelled me to visit very soon, Rob!
Wonderful Kim, I hope it proves most enjoyable… 🙂
Delightful, Rob. So full of joy and wonder. Such a lovely flow to this pantoum, too. Thank you for writing to the prompt!
My pleasure Merril… 🙂
Love it, not quite a mermaid, but probably wants to be.
Mermaid apprentice… 😉
Such a wonderful home at the sea. Love this delightful pantoum.
Thank you Grace… 🙂
What a delightful pantoum, Rob!
Thank you so much Punam… 🙂
A pantoum that floods the senses with beauty, Rob.
What a wonderful comment, Dora — thank you… 🙂