Y our love has me floating
on clouds of enchantment
as higher and higher
my feet leave the ground
my spirit is weightless
my heart is in flight
I am light as a feather
my dreams are unbound
this feeling is magic
like spinning in space
love beats in my heart
such a beautiful sound
I am covered in stardust
I’m waltzing on moonbeams
your kiss has un-earthed me
I’ll never come down
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rob kistner © 2021
Poetry at: dVerse
The best natural high one can have! Well done Rob
Thank you Dwight…
Your waltz definitely needs to be set to music, Rob. You nailed this puppy.
Thank you Lisa…
I had to go back and start over. My first effort was humor, so I let my brain rest, then did this second poem. Glad I did, and glad you liked it!
Lucky, lucky lady …. a most delightful waltz!!!
Thank you Helen!
This waltz of romance, the last verse is stellar.
Thank you True…
I love these lines, Rob:
‘I am covered in stardust
I’m waltzing on moonbeams
your kiss has un-earthed me
I’ll never come down’.
Thank you Kim!
that verse felt very freeing as I wrote it. Could stand alone.
You trip the light fantastic here Rob, so sweet and so dizzyingly, dancingly good!
Thank you Ingrid, very much. The fist interpretation I did of the prompt was more slanted at ribald humor, because I was struggling to find any poetic purchase that moved me. Wasn’t happy, so I started over completely. I am satisfied where I ended though.
Lovely Rob.
I love the word unearthed – and the twist here!
Thank you very much Ren. Thought it was an interesting flip in meaning, that also fit.
A lovely poem, Rob! I particularly enjoyed the last stanza <3
Thank you!
Yup. Tasty work indeed Mr. K.
Dance on.
Thank you Ron…!
This was a nice poem. It definitely had a waltz feel to it, and I like the idea of waltzing on moonbeams. Very pretty.
“covered in stardust, waltzing on moonbeams” words fitting for sweeping across the floor in one two three time!
I have not waltzed since a grade school dance class. Stumbled through at best…
Romantic, beautiful words! Confirms my belief in love!
Thank you Mary…
I love the rhythm of your waltz… perfect to waltz out in space.
Thank you Bjorn!
This feels so weightless and magical, enjoyed it!
Thank you Tricia!
Now there’s a romance.
Glad you liked it Xan!
Stardust and moonbeams – I love this~
Can’t have one without the other Grace…