Original DDE™ surrealistic art: “Golden Sky-City of Desire” by: rob kistner © 11/7/23
A golden sky-city
floats above the sea
may not be for you
it’s heaven to me
so come with me
and you will see
a most surreal
reality
every desire is satisfied
every night’s a fantasy
but you must do your part
here — ain’t nothin’ free
there’s a secret access
locked tight to most
but for the very special
there are private keys
those invited
have been given one
those not invited
they have none
take your forgotten self
elsewher please
to the inner sanctum
a golden stair rises
come barefaced and honest
no false guises
a palace of the carnal
a palace of rare ardor
a palace of hard truth
a palace of tough logic
a palace of rough love
a place of lush pleasure
a phantasmagoric treasure
Original DDE™ surrealistic art: “Golden Goddess Eros”
by: rob kistner © 11/7/23
it’s a place of raw desire
where the golden goddess eros
will ignite your erotic fire
place of amazing miracles
from the most wondrous minds
this place’l grip y’soul
like tempered steel binds
it’s the ever-pulsing artery
feeding the beating heart
of the truly liberated
the truly free
stimulates your libido
elevates your chi
so come now with me
and you will see
a most surreal
reality
may not be for you
but it’s heaven to me
and it ain’t nothin’ like
anything
you’ll ever see
Original DDE™ surrealistic art: “Sanctum of Desire”
by: rob kistner © 11/7/23
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rob kistner © 2023
Poetry at: dVerse
It certainly sounds like a paradise that comes with a price. Tough love, hard truths, etc will make most people squirm. I interpreted this as a sort of metaphorical journey in which you’re very honest with yourself, thereby creating a surreal inner reality, but I don’t know what you had in mind.
Very astute OP. A fantasy piece for sure, but an important key elemental focus of the piece is self talk.
Rob, you make a believer out of me. When do we leave?
New music and like that primal vocalizing at the beginning and at the end of the song.
Hope your dental surgery has already happened and you can get to healing.
Thank you Lisa… got some real pain, but I’ll get to the place beyond…
Great poem I have been to all these places but at different times It was all good for me to learn or to enjoy
Well, it’s a grand opening at the save the move desire this weekend, and I have free passes, Marja, so please, my friend come visit us. 🙂
It’s very tempting, Rob, and I’m happy to ‘come barefaced and honest’.
Well Miss Kim, my friend, you like Ron have a golden all access pass!
Can you hear me knockin’?
Ain’t gt no passwords, but I’m hopin’ to gain access (when the time comes).
Great stuff, Bro.
You gave a golden all access pass my friend! 😉 BTW Ron — please come back and reread, I have mage some key changes.
Sounds like a place combining pleasure and pain in the best way possible…
Yes Björn, a beautiful dance of invigorated life… 🙂
Oh my heart this is absolutely gorgeous!
Thank you Sanaa, very much… 🙂
Well done, Rob.
Thank you Bill… 🙂
“a palace of rare ardor
a palace of hard truth
a palace of tough logic”
All good!
Thank you Melissa… 🙂