painting entitled “Rain Man” by: Vane Kosturanov
One misty moistaly dampinmorn
the mist was most prevailington
and then it started to storminoff
on that misty moistaly dampinmorn
it came up without a warninton
with hailstones angrily hailinous
I missed the mornington weathertold
on that misty moistymous morn
I slept through that mornington’s alarmanoff
so didn’t know ‘bout no warningful storminoff
had I known I mighta stayed homelicated
my lazinations got me quite soaklinated
next time I’ll be more atentuated
so I can venture forth fully umbrellanated
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rob kistner © 2022
Poetry at: dVerse
I had an uncle, Norman who was always storminoff
I think I know him Eric… 😉
This one’s a winner. Your new words are amazing
Much love…
thank you Gillena! 🙂
I love this, Rob: you totally nailed it! And the Beatles too – what a treat 🙂
Thank you Ingrid. Just a bit of whimsy on a rainy day… 🙂
OMG!!! I had a brilliant thought … send this to the best of the best “on air” meteorologists, have them read it to the viewing audience during a Prime Time broadcast. Definitely deserving.
That would be a hoot Helen! I wrote it, and I stumble reading it. Their professional diction would likely carry them through. If they delivered it dead pan straight, I would love to watch the expressions on ghose tuning in. He said wha…….? 😉
Oh you playfully stretched those words like elastics and the rhythm was so snappy!
Glad this pulled you in Mish! 🙂
Better stayin’ layinaid
safe under a blanketoss
to be safe from storminoff
Be warm too. 😉