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your eyes blue as cerulean skies
my yearning heart breathlessly thrilled
beauty such to hypnotize
bird songs carry on freshening breeze
flowers awaken to the kiss of bees
my soul to fullest measure filled
splendor brings me to my knees
rob kistner © 2019
Love this. The image is super incredible. Your poem is swan’s down, and mine is burned toast. I like your line /flowers wake to the kiss of bees./.
Glad you liked this Glenn, and thank you!
that last line brought me to mine – great rhyme structure too
Thank you so much Laura.
Such a romantic, exquisite poem that brings happiness to read.
I am pleased that it does Lisa! 🙂
Such a romantic poem. Very sweet and loving.
Thank you Toni!
Very tender love poem written in well-phrased rhyme and flow. The image is captivating, too.
Thank you Victoria, for your kind words.
I like the thought of being brought to one’s knees with the soul filled.
I’m pleased this touched you Frank.
Beautiful writing. Your words sing!
Thank you Susan… 🙂
Great praise of sunshine and love!
Two of my favorite things Kate!
Such a wonderful cadence to your words Rob.
Thank you Linda…! 🙂
I do so love your poetry, Rob. This is a gentle, romantic read, speaking well for its author!
You are always most kind Beverly, and I appreciate it. 🙂
Love the photo! pure magic…. Your poem captures it all. Total exhilaration.
Thank you Dwight, very much!
Just lovely
You’re most kind JP. 🙂
Such a splendor of a sunrise this is Rob. Thank you for being part of our community.
Thank you Grace, it is my genuine pleasure.
A proposal of love, this heady sunfilled poem. Luv it
Much??????love
Thank you Gillena, very much.
Oh, I do admire you romantic pen. The rhymes flow effortlessly. Twas a delight to read your Sunrise Magic
Thank you True, very much! 🙂
I love the gold and blue of the opening lines, Rob, and the imagery of the birdsong on the breeze and the bee kisses leaves me breathless!
I am very pleased this resonated for you Kim! Thank you for your always kind words… 🙂
This poem is a beautiful gratitude poem.
It is Ayala, it is. 🙂
Pure romance 🙂
Thank you Jane. I have four speeds — dark, light, ethereal, sarcastic. I shifted into light for this one… 🙂
A love poem for a person or for nature itself?
Your choice Carol. They both can certainly be correct… 🙂
Beautiful! And I love that you used one of my favorite color words: cerulean. There’s a cerulean sky in my Quadrille too.
Thank you Linda! Love the word and the color cerulean… 🙂
Not only romantic, but joyously so! Thank you, Rob!
You are welcome Merril – thank you!
quite the romantic, Rob ~
I try… 🙂
Beautiful! I loved “flowers awaken to the kiss of bees” ! But the whole piece is lovely. thanks for sharing it.
You are most welcome Deborah – thank you… 🙂