and the August 25th prompt at Three Word Wednesday,
and prompt #18 at Writer’s Island.
…a short story of intrigue…
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“What do you mean Taylor,†Gwen inquired, the strain obvious in her weary voice. “Who exactly is going to confront Dylan… and why?â€
Her voice trailed off to an exasperated whisper. The why was not so much a question, as an exhalation of confused frustration. She seemed to know the answer was much too complicated to address at this hour, and she was too spent, physically and emotionally, to want to hear it.
Gwen turned away from Taylor, head lowered. Her arms fell limp at her side, fingers splayed. She was trying her best to process what Taylor was saying, to understand him – to understand the recent events that had brought her to this place in time… trying to make sense of anything. Her head was spinning, and she could feel the fatigue deep in her bones.
She dropped back onto the sofa, half sitting, half lying down – an exhausted slouch. She felt paralyzed, thoughts racing through her mind – fragmented, disconnected thoughts. If only she could clear her head. She was in trouble.
She looked at her hands, palms down in her lap, her eyes glazing over. Her vision drifted to her wrists, her left wrist in particular — to her watch. Slowly it came into focus, and she realized she was staring at the broken crystal face of her Audemars Piguet Promesse.
Ever since Dylan had given her this watch for their anniversary, her life had turned upside down – but it had also turned a corner. Fate had pushed her round that corner, and she would never turn back again. Her life as Mrs. Dylan Simonton was over.
She knew this, knew it as surely as she knew she missed her children. Something must be done to get them out of that house – his house. It could no longer be her home, but they would always be her children – and she feared for them. They had to be part of whatever direction fate was leading her.
It was fate that had broken the crystal – fate, and her quick reflexes, blocking Dylan with her forearm as he struck out at her in anger, following their anniversary dinner.
He had apologized, explaining it away as the result of stress. “It will never happen again,†he’d said in his most gentle and sincere voice – but she was familiar with this empty promise to abstain. This was not the first time, and the incidents of abuse were escalating. She knew there wasn’t a prayer he’d ever be any different. He was a violent man.
She’d only come into his office that evening to thank him again for the gorgeous timepiece. She thought this was where he’d retired after leaving the dining table. But she could see, in the subdued light, that he was not there. The mahogany paneled room was empty.
The room, though small, was one of her favorites in their home. The corner location offered windows in the two walls that looked out onto the garden. In better times they would stroll out the door and down the two steps, to talk beneath the trellis, share snifters of Courvoisier, or nuzzle in warm embrace. But these were not better times, and she’d found herself alone again, in the quiet room.
She loved the aroma of his Classic Port pipe tobacco that permeated the walls. Her father had also smoked that blend in his Barling Meerschaum, puffing billowed halos of the heady fragrance, that made her shiver with delight as a child. It was comforting to her now – so she lingered. That’s when she noticed it, on his desk, silhouetted by the light from the Tiffany lamp.
Her curiosity drew her to it. She’d just picked it up when Dylan entered. “What the hell do you think you’re doing? Put that god damned box down,†he’d shouted — then flew into a rage.
Why had her discovery of the leather box sent Dylan over the edge? What were those letters that spilled out when she dropped the box upon being struck?
They’d looked terribly official, with their seals and embossing – and written in a language that she did not recognize. Dylan certainly scrambled frantically to collect them from the antique Persian rug, and return them to the box. But she managed to conceal one, sliding it under her hips as she lay where she’d fallen, following his blow.
Dylan’s bizarre reaction to the correspondence scattered on the floor, and the strangeness of the language they contained, had piqued Gwen’s interest. Instinct drove her to hide the envelope until she was able to fold and slip it into her pocket, as her husband hurried from the room, with the leather box in tow.
Gwen felt it was important that she take this letter she’d spirited out of the room, and put it in safekeeping. She’d planned to somehow learn more about its origin and content.
It was again fate that lead her the next morning to the jewelers, seeking a new watch crystal. It was while standing at the counter, waiting to be served, that she’d spied Dylan coming out of the restaurant across the street, in the company of a women — a stranger to Gwen. They had climbed into a waiting limousine.
Gwen had broken from the counter in a hurry, and bolted through the door to get a better look. Unfortunately, as she’d reached the sidewalk and acquired a reasonable view of the vehicle, it had sped away. She had noticed markings on the door, and a license plate, a type she had not immediately recognized – but she could read neither.
Fate had revealed this convoluted mystery to her, but what was she to do with it. Where could she begin to unravel it? All this was flooding through her mind when she was startled back to the present by Taylor, returning to the room with pillows and a blanket.
“I will take the sofa tonight,†he said, “You’re completely burned out. I’m putting you in my room,†he continued in a kind and caring tone. “My bed is amazingly comfortable, and you need sleep – lots of good, deep sleep.â€
He reached down and took Gwen’s hand, helping her to her feet. Gently wrapping his arm around her waist, he escorted her down the hall and into his room. Stopping just inside the door, he said, “You will be safe in here. We’ll talk about everything in the morning,†and he gave her a warm hug, stepped back into the hall, and closed the door.
Gwen realized there were too many questions to answer, too many mysteries — just too damned much to even think about right now. “Yes, in the morning,†she mumbled to the door.
Then, hugging her red shoulder bag with the mysterious envelope tucked safely inside — Gwen shuffled across the room, and collapsed on the bed.
rob kistner © 2010
I love the symbolism of the broken watch crystal. Well done.
Thank you Willow. This is the opening of a novella, the outline and structure of which I have been developing for a while now. Spurred by your visual prompt here I was able to more fully realize this first chapter, so thank you for helping me complete this important first step…
The broken watch symbolizes the breaking in the progression of time in Gwen’s life — the time before that incident, and the time that will now come after… her past and her future. Each of those periods will be further developed as the plot unfolds, and the broken watch will play two additional important roles in the story.
…rob
Too many questions and not enough answers, yes, you’ve left me with questions too, and I want to know more. I do hope that you will continue this little flash and give me something more to read.
The World of Lost Souls
I am pleased this work engaged you, and I will be continuing this novella Coraline, but when and at what pace is not something I have determined — nor have I decided if I am going to post it publicly, as the intention is to ready it for possible publication… I will announce on my blog, in the near future, what I decide…
…rob
Rob, I thought you captured the startled, confused reality ot that moment when one realizes that life has been altered irrevocalbly, very well. The stumbling both physically and mentally when one knows beyond a shadow of a doubt that nothing will ever be the same and the past is irretrievable. Good beginnings,
Elizabeth
Thank you ElizaBeth, you are most encouraging…
…rob
Can’t wait to read what comes next! Well written…
Your enthusiasm is most flattering Dianne, but as I wrote to CJT (Coraline) above, I am not certain if further chapters of “The Box” will be posted here on Image & Verse, or completed and held for release as a published book… I certainly didn’t intend to frustrate anyone, I was just posting the first chapter in response to a prompt…
…rob
An excellent beginning!
Thank you Mama Zen…
…rob
Waiting for more…
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There will be more, but maybe not publicly posted, as the focus of this project for me is a published novella — but I am very pleased you would like to read more Gautami…
…rob
oh my- I hope this is just chapter one and that we will learn more…great writing!
Thank you so much Kathe, this is only chapter one of a writing endeavor I have been working on for a couple years, just don’t know right now how the rest of the novella will come forth — either publicly posted on my blog, or published as a book…
…rob
Wow same too! Can’t wait to see what going to be next!
Pleased you find this work engaging Riika…
…rob