Original DDE™ surrealistic art entitled “The Lotus” by: rob kistner © 8/7/24
Dream with me my love
love is the magic we will seek
seek it until the end of days
days numbering to eternity
eternity — where love’s magic hides
hides in the folds of the lotus
lotus petals — love’s open wings
wings of pure beauty and truth
truth — the key to perfect surrender
surrender is the secret of love’s dream
dream that goes on — forever
Original DDE™ surrealistic art entitled “For You Love”
by: rob kistner © 8/7/24
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This is gorgeous, Rob…heart throbbing…Is this a particular form? I think I remember a form that uses the last word as the first word in the next line.
dream that goes on — forever
forever tell me this dream is real…
ok, I felt compelled to add a line…humor me
Thank you True. The form is called a loop. We had it as a prompt a couple years ago on dVerse. Great line my friend… 🙂
Love is the magic. Beautiful hoop poem Rob.
Thank you Grace. Love is the answer.
Great use of the form Rob
Thank you Eric… 🙂
This is so beautifully written, Rob!
Thank you Sara… 🙂