Unencumbered

“This portrait is a portrait of courage, written to share my belief that quality of life is a matter of attitude. The positive attitude that begets the gratitude to be alive. I am a writer, always drawing on fact and intelligent fiction to write meaningful works”
 

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Taken in 2013 at a rock concert in Germany.

 

Unencumbered

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unquestionably joy
in a most unexpected place
the eyes of a fighter
cruel society deems disabled

he may be immobile
legs withered useless
confined to others’ care
and his rolling metal chair

but he’s a dude

black nike high-tops
black denim slacks
skin-tight black t-shirt
black leather wristband

cool smile
on a rugged face

total bad-ass

but his gentle eyes
reflect a wonder
my jaded heart
has long since lost

by vanity
sadly extinguished

his spirit knows only trust
it pours forth from his soul

hoisted lovingly
above the crowd
he is enthralled
by the rhythm
enraptured
by the magic

the guitar soars
the saxman wails
the singer roars
the drummer flails

he rocks and waves
fist pumps and sways
joy’s so widespread
he throws back his head

fully alive
locked in the moment
consumed
by every note
every beat
every nuance

he experiences an ecstasy
at which I can only marvel

oh, if I could but feel
the purity of joy
this special being feels

so complete
so unencumbered

~ ~ ~

rob kistner © 2019

NOTE: This portrait is a composite of 3 people. Two in this composite are real, and the third is my imaginings regarding the great courage of the man, unknown to me, pictured in the amazing photo above. The first in my personal life is Barry, my lifelong friend and former business partner, now confined to a chair with MS. He is a brilliant photographer. I have written about Barry before here on Image & Verse, and shown some of his remarkable work. The 2nd is a man I met during cardiac rehabilitation, following the 2017 implantation of my pacemaker, after my 4th heart attack. He is a physical therapist with a severed lower spinal cord. Both these guys are amazing dudes, and deserving of a portrait in courage.

 

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Rob Kistner enjoying a Kandinsky at SFMOMA in San Francisco.

 

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  • 30 thoughts on “Unencumbered”

      1. Thank you Toni. This portrait is a composite of a lifelong friend, who deals with MS, and is nowv confined to a chair for 16 years. He was my business partner for years, until this debilitating disease took him down. This is also a reflection of man, I have known now for over 2 years. I met him while I was in cardiac rehabilitation. He is a physical therapist, confined to a chair for 26 years, since he was 17. A car crash severed his lower spinal cord. He is one of the strongest people I have ever met — mentally and physically.

    1. Damn, this is a powerful and personal profile. The picture is fantastic as well. Is this fiction, you writing to the picture, or is this really your brother? As a former musician, you really set the scene, transporting us. I am very touched by your words; ironically now it is us in the metal wheel chairs, dreaming of halcyon hikes and 100 yard dashes.

      1. Thank you Glenn. It ia a composite of 3 people. Two real, and the third is my imaginings regarding the image in the photo. One in real life is Barry, my lifelong friend and former business partner, now confined to a chair with MS. He is a brilliant photographer. I have written about Barry before, and shown some of his work. The 2nd is a man I met in 2017, during cardiac rehabilitation. A physical therapist with a severed lower spine. Both these guys are amazing dudes.

    2. Wonderful Rob. Such great descriptions of this young man seizing the day and overcoming every handicap. Just proves once again that Quality of life is in the mind not in the body!

      1. Thank you Dwight. Yes, quality of life is in the attitude, where lives gratitude. It is sometimes difficult to embrace gratitude, occasionally it might feel nearly impossible. But with the death of gratitude goes the death of joy. If no joy whatsoever can be found in a life — then it is no longer a life… it becomes simply a waiting for death.

    3. A powerful portrait, Rob! I like the way you contrast his immobility with his free-flying, somersaulting soul, and how you separated the lines ‘but he’s a dude’ and ‘total-bad-ass’, sandwiched them in the detailed description of his clothes, his smile and his gentle eyes. The splash of music tells us so much more about him, lets us rock and wave with him.

    4. So very cool — I love how you define the portrait through this moment of unencumbered joy and exhilaration. Your verbs are so strong and put us in action too, as we read the poem.

    5. I so admire the spirit they feel to go on… you got to have some passion in your life, and it’s not always in your legs.

    6. Thanks for the confirmation that happiness is an energetic state unfazed by the weather of our passing emotions, and accessible to us all once we believe in choice.

    7. This is an excellent portrait of three very different people. But, they all have an attitude of survival.

    8. and the funny thing is, they probably don’t see themselves as icons, as people in which to gather courage and hope. I know a few like this… We are truly blessed for knowing them.

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