NaPoMo poem #10
This is the tenth of the poems I will be writing each day here in April, in honor of National Poetry Month, as proclaimed by the Academy of American Poets.
Suggested by read write poem as a poem for day 10 of National Poetry Month; this type is known as a ‘found poem’. Passages here are borrowed from the pages of Robert A. Heinlein’s science fiction masterpiece, “Stranger in a Strange Landâ€. While still holding fast to the spirit of Heinlein’s novel, I’ve slightly rearranged, and mildly embellished the text to create this piece entitled “Valâ€.
• NOTE: these poems will all essentially be early drafts, so edits may occur after their initial posting.
Val
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valentine michael smith
was a most intelligent creature
a son
of deep space pioneers
he lived an alien
on the far frontier
his ancestry was human
raised on mars
by planet natives
he thought and felt
quite martian
he’d never laid eyes
on man
brought to earth
by scientists
who knew not
how to grok* smith
who knew not
how not to
and quickly grokked
the madhouse planet
he understood earth
and its suffering
so thoroughly
it became his own
it nearly drove him crazy
heartfelt
val reached out
to spread enlightenment
for this
he was despised
feared and hated
quite ungrokked
smith was sadly slain
his death was brutal
he died as he lived
a stranger
in a strange land
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rob kistner © 2009
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*Grok – to understand so thoroughly, the observer becomes part of the observed
• you can find other NaPoMo offerings at read write poem
Man, I have thought of that book in forever. I read it in high school and remember loving it. Thanks for the poem and the memories.
LOL Love the direction you took this!
http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/stitch-in-timenapowrimo-10by-me.html
Stranger in a strange land….I can remember my ex wife reading this many moons ago.. “earth’s fat head scientists” reminds me of two good friends that i play poker with on Wed nites… one is a math major other a science major…good poker players but its all math and logic with them ….so when i put them on tilt and play with their heads and use some intuition…well as smart as these 2 “fathead” friends are…they seem to lose more than they win. So to “grok”…is that like intuition?…this is a new word to me..but it seems to be like intuition.. Sorry for the long rant…
Ok. I totally grok. Grok and roll!
Nice job, great choice.
Brilliant! This really works!